College Essay Mistakes That Can Hurt Your Student's Application

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October 1, 2026 | 5 PM PT

Ford T.

Former Admissions Officer at Johns Hopkins University

5,000+ Applications Read

Help your child avoid common essay mistakes and write in a way that is authentic, memorable, and distinctly their own.

Ford T.

Former Johns Hopkins Admissions Officer

5,000+ Applications Read


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Your student may have the grades, activities, and experiences to build a strong application. But if their essays sound generic, repeat what admissions officers already know, or lose their authentic voice, they can miss the opportunity to show who they are beyond their accomplishments.


Ford reviewed 1,200+ applications annually at Johns Hopkins and knows what helps an essay reveal something meaningful about a student. Learn what to avoid and how to help your student’s story come through clearly and authentically.

What You'll Learn

Spot topics that sound like everyone else

Learn why seemingly “safe” essay ideas can become predictable and what helps a familiar topic feel personal and memorable.

Avoid turning the essay into a résumé

Understand what admissions officers want to learn from an essay that grades, activities, and accomplishments can't already tell them.

Protect your student’s authentic voice

See how too much editing and outside input can make a polished essay feel less like the student who actually wrote it.

Know what makes an essay stand out

Learn what admissions readers notice in effective essays and how your student can reveal something meaningful without needing an extraordinary story.

Plus a live Q&A — bring your questions and we'll answer them during the webinar.

October 1 at 5 PM PT. Spots are free and limited.

College Counselor

Former Johns Hopkins Admissions Officer | 5,000+ Applications Reviewed

Ford T.

Meet Your Host

Ford brings over 5 years of experience in admissions at Johns Hopkins University, where he supported 1,200+ applicants annually from the Pacific Northwest and Canada. As a committee member and Assistant Director, he led scholarship selection, revamped the reading process, and launched a Humanities Overnight Program. He holds a BA in Theater from the University of Mary Washington and has helped students gain admission to top schools including NYU, Duke, JHU, Georgetown, and the UCs—specializing in STEM and CS applicants.


In this session, Ford will break down the essay mistakes admissions officers see again and again. You’ll leave knowing what to avoid and how to help your child’s authentic voice come through.

College Counselor

Former Johns Hopkins Admissions Officer

5,000+ Applications Reviewed

Is it really free?
Completely. No cost, no card, no obligation.
What if I can't attend live?
Register anyway and we'll send a recording. The live Q&A and the $500 giveaway are for attendees only.
Who should attend?
Parents and students in grades 9-12. Come together if you can.
How long is it?

About 60 minutes, including the live Q&A.

Will I be sold to?
You'll get the strategy first. At the end we share how Empowerly can help if you want more.

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