College Essays: What NOT to Do
FREE WEBINAR
September 2, 2026 | 5 PM PT
Daniel Mark
Lead Counselor
Former Senior Admissions Officer at
Brown University
Gain a candid look into the quiet essay mistakes that sink high-achieving applicants, straight from a former Brown University admissions officer.
Identifying "Safe" Topic Traps
Why conventional, overly cautious essay topics frequently fall flat with competitive readers, and how to pivot toward narrative choices that demonstrate genuine depth.
Eradicating Application Clichés
How to spot predictable tropes, formulaic structures, and worn-out metaphors early in the drafting process before they dilute your child's authentic voice.
The Ivy League Review Filter
Behind-the-scenes insights into how selective admissions officers distinguish between generic storytelling and compelling personal reflection during file review.
September 2, 2026 | 5 PM PT
Lead Counselor
Former Senior Admissions Officer at Brown University
Daniel Mark
Meet Your Host
Daniel Mark brings five years of admissions experience to Empowerly, having served as a Senior Admissions Officer at Brown University and Assistant Director of Admissions at Connecticut College. With over 5,000 applications reviewed, hundreds of students interviewed, and 50+ admission committees under his belt, Daniel has evaluated applicants for highly selective programs including Brown's PLME BS/MD and the Brown/RISD dual degree. He also counsels students on essays, college lists, and testing strategy.
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